Some minor text revisions

src/credits.c

@@ -68,13 +68,6 @@ static void credits_fill(void) {
 		"Original soundtrack"
 	), ENTRY_TIME);
 
-	credits_add((
-		"InsideI\n"
-		"Mikhail Novik\n"
-		"Bandcamp: https://is.gd/owojix\n\n"
-		"Sound effects"
-	), ENTRY_TIME);
-
 	credits_add((
 		"Lalasa\n"
 		"Ola Kruzel\n"
@@ -115,6 +108,13 @@ static void credits_fill(void) {
 		"http://www16.big.or.jp/~zun/"
 	), ENTRY_TIME);
 
+	credits_add((
+		"InsideI\n"
+		"Mikhail Novik\n"
+		"Bandcamp: https://is.gd/owojix\n\n"
+		"Various sound effects"
+	), ENTRY_TIME);
+
 	credits_add((
 		"Free Software\n"
 		"Simple DirectMedia Layer\n"

src/dialog/reimu.c

@@ -21,7 +21,8 @@ static void dialog_reimu_stage1_pre_boss(Dialog *d) {
 }
 
 static void dialog_reimu_stage1_post_boss(Dialog *d) {
-	M(Left, "A~ah, it’s snowing during springtime. It’s actually a bit pretty to look at.");
+	M(Left, "A~ah, what a sight! It’s snowing during springtime.");
+	M(Left, "A little too cold for my taste, though. I'd rather get going.");
 }
 
 static void dialog_reimu_stage2_pre_boss(Dialog *d) {

src/ending.c

@@ -160,9 +160,6 @@ static void create_ending(Ending *e) {
 		add_ending_entry(e, 400, "Sorry, extra stage isn’t done yet. ^^", NULL);
 	}
 
-	if(global.diff == D_Lunatic)
-		add_ending_entry(e, 400, "Lunatic? Nice! Be sure to upload it somewhere including a commentary of your agony. We are into that kind of- I mean it helps with balancing! Did you know the devs can only play Easy and Normal? I’m sure you had a lot of fun with creative patterns such as Natural Cathode or ToE or whatever happens in Stage 4. Anyways catch ya laterr...", NULL);
-
 	add_ending_entry(e, 400, "", NULL); // this is important
 	e->duration = 1<<23;
 }

src/menu/difficultyselect.c

@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ void create_difficulty_menu(MenuData *m) {
 	m->flags = MF_Transient | MF_Abortable;
 
 	add_menu_entry(m, "“All those bullets confuse me!”\nYou will be stuck here forever", set_difficulty, (void *)D_Easy);
-	add_menu_entry(m, "“So this isn’t about shooting things?”\nSomewhat challenging", set_difficulty, (void *)D_Normal);
-	add_menu_entry(m, "“Why can’t I beat this?”\nActually challenging", set_difficulty, (void *)D_Hard);
-	add_menu_entry(m, "“What is pain?”\nAsian mode", set_difficulty, (void *)D_Lunatic);
+	add_menu_entry(m, "“So it's not just about shooting stuff?”\nSomewhat challenging", set_difficulty, (void *)D_Normal);
+	add_menu_entry(m, "“Pain is my ally!”\nActually challenging", set_difficulty, (void *)D_Hard);
+	add_menu_entry(m, "“I have no fear.”\nWe never playtested this one", set_difficulty, (void *)D_Lunatic);
 
 	for(int i = 0; i < m->ecount; ++i) {
 		Difficulty d = (Difficulty)(uintptr_t)m->entries[i].arg;

src/plrmodes/marisa.c

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ PlayerCharacter character_marisa = {
 	.lower_name = "marisa",
 	.proper_name = "Marisa",
 	.full_name = "Kirisame Marisa",
-	.title = "Black Magician",
+	.title = "Ordinary Black Magician",
 	.dialog_sprite_name = "dialog/marisa",
 	.player_sprite_name = "player/marisa",
 	.ending = {

src/plrmodes/reimu.c

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ PlayerCharacter character_reimu = {
 	.lower_name = "reimu",
 	.proper_name = "Reimu",
 	.full_name = "Hakurei Reimu",
-	.title = "Shrine Maiden",
+	.title = "Shrine Maiden of Paradise",
 	.dialog_sprite_name = "dialog/reimu",
 	.player_sprite_name = "player/reimu",
 	.ending = {