What I like about our current PP, and what people were positively commenting about, is that it is not too 'Lawyered up". The structure is simple, the alguage is simple so I would like to keep it in this casual form and just add what we are missing.
the current TOC is:
What do we do with your data
What we do not do with your data
Access to your information
Per Service additional privacy policies and exceptions
We could add:
What data do we collect?
How do we store your data?
Additional Privacy Policies and exceptions per service
2. What data do we collect?
3. What do we do with your data
4. What we do not do with your data (I like this...it could be merged with point 3)
5. How do we store your data?
6. Additional Privacy Policies and exceptions per service
7. Your rights -> Access to your information
"5. Detailed privacy notice per service"
"5. Detailed overview per service provided by Disroot.org"
The current proposed point 5 is still somehow connected to the previous way, which lists only exeptions etc, while we want to change it to give general overview per service. So even if the details are the same (like we dont keep logs for this service) it should be mention for all the ones affected, to avoid confusion where people think we keep logs for everything for 24 hours.