update delimter info #450

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solves Disroot/Disroot-Project#671
@fede @meaz @kitleopold @l3o please check and fix my translations :)

solves https://git.disroot.org/Disroot/Disroot-Project/issues/671 @fede @meaz @kitleopold @l3o please check and fix my translations :)

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I believe that one pronoun should be replaced with a specific word that is being talked about in the sentence. In the penultimate and last sentence there is a repetition of the pronoun “он”("he"). In the penultimate sentence, the pronoun "он"(“he”) refers to a person. In the last sentence, the pronoun "он"("he") refers to the email address. Such a repetition of the pronoun does not look very clear in this context, although after reading the entire text, one can logically understand who (or what) the pronoun "он"(“he”) in the last sentence refers to. I suggest replacing the pronoun "Он"("he") in the last sentence with the words "Этот адрес"("This address").

I believe that one pronoun should be replaced with a specific word that is being talked about in the sentence. In the penultimate and last sentence there is a repetition of the pronoun **“он”("he")**. In the penultimate sentence, the pronoun **"он"(“he”)** refers to a person. In the last sentence, the pronoun "он"("he") refers to the email address. Such a repetition of the pronoun does not look very clear in this context, although after reading the entire text, one can logically understand who (or what) the pronoun **"он"(“he”)** in the last sentence refers to. I suggest replacing the pronoun "Он"("he") in the last sentence with the words **"Этот адрес"("This address")**.

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