diff --git a/linode-custom-install.md b/linode-custom-install.md index ed56e57..58f6898 100644 --- a/linode-custom-install.md +++ b/linode-custom-install.md @@ -1,6 +1,4 @@ - - OK, backing out of earlier suggestion, which was based on a misunderstanding of the document in question: @@ -8,16 +6,16 @@ of the document in question: The problem occurs if the reader loses track of the roles of the disk images through the process. In **Rescue Mode**, a pile of bits goes into a volume -known temporarily as /dev/sda. +known temporarily as ```/dev/sda```. Then, booting into the **Installer profile**, that pile of bits gets a -different name, /dev/sdb. Those bits are used to boot, but only +different name, ```/dev/sdb```. Those bits are used to boot, but only temporarily, during installation. Unlike in **Rescue mode**, the name -/dev/sda is applied to a different volume, a volume intended to receive the +```/dev/sda``` is applied to a different volume, a volume intended to receive the installed system and eventually to become the boot volume. Finally, in the **Boot profile**, that pile of bits, still under the name -/dev/sda, is used to boot the system. +```/dev/sda```, is used to boot the system. At this point, I think I'll suggest changing the language so that the two profiles do not have the same names as the two disk images. Use of the term @@ -48,9 +46,12 @@ In the **Production** profile, one boots from the **target** image, and the **in The process optionally can stop here, or continue into the improvements suggested by the rest of the document. +Again, the installation necessarily entails 3 boots--into **Rescue Mode**, +into the **Installer** profile, and into the **Boot** profile + It is easier to miss the switch in the role of the disk names and volume -roles because, even though the installation necessarily entails 3 -boots--into **Rescue Mode**, into the **Installer** profile, and into the -**Boot** profile--this document visually draws out the two profiles -**Installer** and **Boot** but in contrast somewhat buries the implicit -aspects of the volume used to boot in **Rescue Mode**. +roles through this process because this document visually draws out the two +profiles **Installer** and **Boot**. In contrast, it somewhat buries the +implicit aspects of the existing volume from which the system is booted into +**Rescue Mode**. +